poetic forms

When an Unstoppable Force Meets an Almost Immovable Object

The Chanso sounded like a good form to get back into the poetry habit. Why? Freedom! Five to six stanzas punctuated by an envoy about half the size of the stanza. Same syllable count per line, and uniform rhyme scheme across stanzas. P.S., this is harder than I remember.

The Unstoppable Force

If joy could be found in contentedness,
then I have met my quota, and then some.
The sea was calm and the mind had left stress
to a paranoid world and its crude hum.

Minding my own, blissfully unaware…
Natural order on my horizon.
Darwin doesn’t care if you aren’t prepared.
Despite your ego, he’s already won.

At first a passing thought. A whim. Weightless.
“Nothing rocks my boat – I’m cool as they come.”
But the waves churned deeper, breaking surface.
This is something I was meant to become.

Admitting the truth to your self is rare.
So much easier to ride the tide on.
But fate is molded by nature and where
real life transpires. The rest is delusion.

Revelation can be a slow process,
the journey proves to be too much for some.
But in the wake of a spell of distress
you can find the strength to break through the numb.

Nature will not be denied or despaired.
The Unstoppable Force is always there.

Cascade Serenade

The Cascade form is a modern style that repeats each line of the first tercet or quatrain in subsequent stanzas. It offers a sort of reflective, cyclical veil over the text like most forms with repeating lines (hence, cascading). It doesn’t require any rhyme or meter, but I still like to incorporate rhyme to make it a bit more challenging. I decided to go with four tercets, but you could also try with five quatrains. My tercet version follows ABC | abA | cdB | efC.

I wanted to hum you a sweet serenade.
I sensed you needed calmness that moment.
Maybe you can meet me in the song.

It’s so like you to put up a barricade,
but I can’t offer something more potent –
I wanted to hum you a sweet serenade.

Your agitation may not last too long,
but I need to end it, and end it now.
I sensed you needed calmness that moment.

For all the moments we get together,
let’s spend them in beauty, peace, and love.
Maybe you can meet me in the song…

Mirror Mountain

Nine to One

Nine to One

I always thought I would change the world
with a Great Novel for my time.
So sure I was meant to be
a Great entrepreneur,
or a Great artist,
Great anything.
But instead,
I’m here.
Small.
Human.
And I live,
and I have love,
and I feel passion,
and I have confidence,
and I let my mind run free,
and I do not dwell on regrets,
and I savor moments of Greatness.